Most Intriguing Character

In my openion Lenord is the most intriguing character. I think he wants to do the right thing all the time, but feels that since hes a policeman he fells obligated to do policeman work. For example he knows that Finch is a good woman and hates having to arrest her for the charges of harassing Lois Armour. When he went out to get Finch on the boat he reasoned with her and learned how to fish. I think he is a really nice person, but he knows that he needs to do his job. He puts his job infront of anything else. I think he knows that Lois Armour is a pain, but he is forced to do things he dosn't want to. Lenord is a very interesting character.

Taking Stock of Your Work

- In general I believe I did well in telling the story. There is a clear begining, middle and ending with good details supporting each.
- My strong points are my catchy title and good ending.
- I think my grammer could always use improvement and my formating needs something also.
- I was thinking about why I don't like to read and I thought of the times I made an effort to read and failed.
- I wrote down details that I remembered and just started writing.
- I could have used a picture of the cover of a book, but I didn't think we could use pictures.
- Other people liked the story, but didn't think it was that interesting. They also mentioned that my grammer was a little poor. I would have to agree.
- I will try and fix my grammer mistakes and make my story more interesing.