Taking Stock of Your Work

- In general I believe I did well in telling the story. There is a clear begining, middle and ending with good details supporting each.
- My strong points are my catchy title and good ending.
- I think my grammer could always use improvement and my formating needs something also.
- I was thinking about why I don't like to read and I thought of the times I made an effort to read and failed.
- I wrote down details that I remembered and just started writing.
- I could have used a picture of the cover of a book, but I didn't think we could use pictures.
- Other people liked the story, but didn't think it was that interesting. They also mentioned that my grammer was a little poor. I would have to agree.
- I will try and fix my grammer mistakes and make my story more interesing.